Nice improvement! I would say the first seven pages of sketch pages are still in need of improvement, in terms of selection of sketches (the newsprints) and arrangement/composition. The dead front and rear renderings are not as exciting as your original pencil sketches. They are looking too dark and wheels are looking toyish. Rendering these at the caliber of your other renderings (like the high eye level action shot) would be a great addition to your portfolio.
Nice improvement! I would say the first seven pages of sketch pages are still in need of improvement, in terms of selection of sketches (the newsprints) and arrangement/composition. The dead front and rear renderings are not as exciting as your original pencil sketches. They are looking too dark and wheels are looking toyish. Rendering these at the caliber of your other renderings (like the high eye level action shot) would be a great addition to your portfolio.
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