tom, thanks for posting. the rear detail in 3b is pretty cool. it's dramatic. i like it. a suggestion--i think it would be helpful for your vehicle to have a competitor/benchmark. look for some crazy concept off-road/terrain vehicles that you are willing to outdo, and put their images on the wall(look at daniel simon's work, simkom.com, etc). designs such as 2b or 3c is too reminiscent of usual cars. gotta be more daring, adventurous, and dramatic... create an entertaining experience for your audience.
starting to look more energetic! I would caution you against hte first and last two of inspirtational images--they are just cars with fancy openings and slits. i'm afraid you are still not deviating enough from that trend.
on the viscom issue, your tip up 3/4 front views need the far wheels to be drawn.
i think your sketches are becoming more dynamic and entertaining to look at. however, the conceptual side is on the weaker side. the story of your concept should be explored in this series of sketches (i.e. batteries, occupant packaging, cargo, how the vehicle is equipped to handle challenging terraines, etc.) Aim for a clarity of thought--the look of the vehicle, even it styling aspect, needs to tell your story.
tom, thanks for posting. the rear detail in 3b is pretty cool. it's dramatic. i like it. a suggestion--i think it would be helpful for your vehicle to have a competitor/benchmark. look for some crazy concept off-road/terrain vehicles that you are willing to outdo, and put their images on the wall(look at daniel simon's work, simkom.com, etc). designs such as 2b or 3c is too reminiscent of usual cars. gotta be more daring, adventurous, and dramatic... create an entertaining experience for your audience.
ReplyDeleteCool David, thanks for the comment
ReplyDeletestarting to look more energetic! I would caution you against hte first and last two of inspirtational images--they are just cars with fancy openings and slits. i'm afraid you are still not deviating enough from that trend.
ReplyDeleteon the viscom issue, your tip up 3/4 front views need the far wheels to be drawn.
i think your sketches are becoming more dynamic and entertaining to look at. however, the conceptual side is on the weaker side. the story of your concept should be explored in this series of sketches (i.e. batteries, occupant packaging, cargo, how the vehicle is equipped to handle challenging terraines, etc.) Aim for a clarity of thought--the look of the vehicle, even it styling aspect, needs to tell your story.
ReplyDeleteThanks for the crit David
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